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betaplease2013-05-10 06:38 pm
barbayat) wrote in betaplease2013-05-10 06:38 pm
Entry tags:
Star Trek into Darkness beta
Fandom: Star Trek into Darkness
Character: I don't want to spoiler anyone who has not seen the movie yet, let's just say it involves Benedict Cumberbatch's character ...
Pairing: maybe later on
Notes:
It's sort of a sequel set a year after the movie, involves Cardassians, an original character, the crew will only get drawn in much later (for obvious reasons if you have seen the film you will know where they are ...)
I am looking for someone who can look at pacing, tell me if I need to include more or less internal dialogue, or if I should describe something more. Grammar correction would also be nice.
Character: I don't want to spoiler anyone who has not seen the movie yet, let's just say it involves Benedict Cumberbatch's character ...
Pairing: maybe later on
Notes:
It's sort of a sequel set a year after the movie, involves Cardassians, an original character, the crew will only get drawn in much later (for obvious reasons if you have seen the film you will know where they are ...)
I am looking for someone who can look at pacing, tell me if I need to include more or less internal dialogue, or if I should describe something more. Grammar correction would also be nice.