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betaplease2015-02-05 10:40 pm
aboutelle) wrote in betaplease2015-02-05 10:40 pm
Entry tags:
Femslash PWP in need of a grammar check
Fandom: How to get away with murder
Characters/Pairings: Bonnie Winterbottom/Annalise Keating
Rating & Warnings: Explicit sex, dubcon, abuse of power, masochism and humiliation
Notes: It's a ~5000 word PWP with very explicit sex, so please be over 18
Hey there, I managed to finish my first English language fic today and I'm looking for a native English speaker to give it a look before I embarrass myself.
If you happen to be familiar with the show I'll gladly accept criticism on characterization and any concrit you might have is appreciated but since I'm ESL I'm mainly looking for feedback a la "That word doesn't mean what you think it means", "That word belongs at the end of the sentence" or even "I can't exactly tell why, but that sentence just sounds really weird to me."
Characters/Pairings: Bonnie Winterbottom/Annalise Keating
Rating & Warnings: Explicit sex, dubcon, abuse of power, masochism and humiliation
Notes: It's a ~5000 word PWP with very explicit sex, so please be over 18
Hey there, I managed to finish my first English language fic today and I'm looking for a native English speaker to give it a look before I embarrass myself.
If you happen to be familiar with the show I'll gladly accept criticism on characterization and any concrit you might have is appreciated but since I'm ESL I'm mainly looking for feedback a la "That word doesn't mean what you think it means", "That word belongs at the end of the sentence" or even "I can't exactly tell why, but that sentence just sounds really weird to me."