Looking for someone who could review/help tweak dialogue for Scouse-ness (or at least Brit-ness). Material totals about 20- 30 lines of dialogue in the final third of a 10K story.
Google doc with the pertinent (or should that be impertinent?) lines already highlighted. Prefer to have by 24 Oct, but there's some flex to that date.
I could definitely help with the Brit-ness, possibly also the Scouse-ness to some extent. But I should warn you that I've never read any of the Hellblazer comics, if you need someone familiar with the canon? My email is notforthewideworld AT gmail.com if you want to drop me a link to the google doc.
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(I've got someone familiar with the canon, but that only gets me to what the character would say, and not how they would say it, if that makes sense?)