A direct request for a beta.

[sisterofbloomerjunior]

Fandom: Jojo's Bizarre Adventure: Vento Aureo

Characters/Pairings: Narancia Ghirga, Trish Una, Guido Mista, Pannacotta Fugo, Giorno Giovanna, and some OMCs. The main pairing's NaraTrish.

Rating & Warnings: Most likely Teen. Trigger warnings for domestic violence, violence, nausea, sexism, and death.

Estimated Fic Length: ~ 2,000 words.

Notes: The parts I really want help with are if the battle scene in Chapter Seven makes sense, if I need to be more descriptive, and pacing. Thanks!

Comments

[enemytosleep]

I don't know the fandom at all, but I can help read the battle scene for pacing and description if a JoJo fan can't be found.

Thanks!

[sisterofbloomerjunior]

Should I contact you to figure out how to send it to you?

Re: Thanks!

[enemytosleep]

No problem, I've sent you a DM with GoogleDoc info now!

EDIT: it looks like you have a JoJo fan offering to look at things, so up to you if you'd like us both to offer ideas (I'm happy to help or to sit back so just let me know if you do send it my way).

[blueshiftofdeath]

I love Jojo and can beta! I might be a little slow since I'm super busy right now, but 2k seems super doable.

Thanks!

[sisterofbloomerjunior]

Best way to contact you? Ooh, FF icon. :)

Re: Thanks!

[blueshiftofdeath]

Maybe Dreamwidth DM? I can also send you my email address. Usually when I beta for my friends, they put it in a google doc, give me "suggesting" abilities, and then I just go through and add some comments. :-)