sisterofbloomerjunior: Purple candle wound around barbed wire (narancia and trish)
sisterofbloomerjunior ([personal profile] sisterofbloomerjunior) wrote in [community profile] betaplease2021-01-07 12:10 am

A direct request for a beta.

Fandom: Jojo's Bizarre Adventure: Vento Aureo

Characters/Pairings: Narancia Ghirga, Trish Una, Guido Mista, Pannacotta Fugo, Giorno Giovanna, and some OMCs. The main pairing's NaraTrish.

Rating & Warnings: Most likely Teen. Trigger warnings for domestic violence, violence, nausea, sexism, and death.

Estimated Fic Length: ~ 2,000 words.

Notes: The parts I really want help with are if the battle scene in Chapter Seven makes sense, if I need to be more descriptive, and pacing. Thanks!
enemytosleep: [Edward Elric from Fullmetal Alchemist] colored image of a teen boy adjusting his tie, looking serious (Default)

[personal profile] enemytosleep 2021-01-08 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know the fandom at all, but I can help read the battle scene for pacing and description if a JoJo fan can't be found.
enemytosleep: [Edward Elric from Fullmetal Alchemist] colored image of a teen boy adjusting his tie, looking serious (Default)

Re: Thanks!

[personal profile] enemytosleep 2021-01-08 12:04 pm (UTC)(link)
No problem, I've sent you a DM with GoogleDoc info now!

EDIT: it looks like you have a JoJo fan offering to look at things, so up to you if you'd like us both to offer ideas (I'm happy to help or to sit back so just let me know if you do send it my way).
Edited 2021-01-08 12:06 (UTC)
blueshiftofdeath: still life of an apple and halved lemon in a basket (Default)

[personal profile] blueshiftofdeath 2021-01-08 10:30 am (UTC)(link)
I love Jojo and can beta! I might be a little slow since I'm super busy right now, but 2k seems super doable.
blueshiftofdeath: still life of an apple and halved lemon in a basket (Default)

Re: Thanks!

[personal profile] blueshiftofdeath 2021-01-12 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
Maybe Dreamwidth DM? I can also send you my email address. Usually when I beta for my friends, they put it in a google doc, give me "suggesting" abilities, and then I just go through and add some comments. :-)