Beta for a JJBA fic

[tropicsbear]

EDIT: Beta found!

Fandom: JoJo's Bizarre Adventure
Characters/Pairings: Bruno Buccellati/Leone Abbacchio
Rating & Warnings: Teen and up audiences, no warnings
Estimated Fic Length: ~4,000 words when completed
Notes: Set post-canon/post-Vento Aureo, the two are reunited in the afterlife and Bruno decides to finally make a move. The only problem is that Abbacchio's ex-partner keeps getting in the way.

Aside from the usual spelling and grammar checks, I'm also hoping for feedback on characterization and story flow, if anything needs to be fleshed out more, etc. This is my first time writing Bruabba so I'm not sure if I've got their voices quite right.

Comments

[blueshiftofdeath]

I could beta for this!

[tropicsbear]

Oh, hello! It's me from the JJBA comm XD (I recently changed my username).

Aaaah thank you so much for the interest in beta-ing this thing. I'll PM you the link to the draft.

[blueshiftofdeath]

I actually recognized you by your icon!! I was like "WAIT A MINUTE.. ISNT THAT OUR GREAT MOD?" (Thanks so much for running that btw-- I know it's super inactive, but it's still great having it there!! I'm hopeful for more activity in the future...)

[tropicsbear]

I have Plans! For comm stuff! I just need to find the time to actually put them in motion 😂

[blueshiftofdeath]

Well, count me as hype for when the time comes!! :D