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betaplease2025-03-28 09:02 am
elisheva_m) wrote in betaplease2025-03-28 09:02 am
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readers for a short piece
The lakorn-novel I'm writing has a ways to go before it's ready for beta readers, but I'd like to know what others make of the end of one of the scenes. The friend who's read it missed part of what I had hoped to convey.
Fandom: None - original fiction. Genre is Thai lakorn
Pairings: het (OC)
Rating/Warning: No CW. Teen and up
Length: 614 words
Notes: See post intro. Impressions re the ending are fine. Anything else if you feel like it.
It's this post here.
Fandom: None - original fiction. Genre is Thai lakorn
Pairings: het (OC)
Rating/Warning: No CW. Teen and up
Length: 614 words
Notes: See post intro. Impressions re the ending are fine. Anything else if you feel like it.
It's this post here.