betaplease | Critical Role Beta

Fandom: FMA/Critical Role
Characters/Pairings: Ling Yao & Jester Lavorre
Ratings & Warnings: A fairly safe gen fic, though potential series spoilers for both
Estimated Fic Length: 3k
Notes: This is my intoabar piece, hence the crossover! I have FMA readers handy, but this is my first CR fic so I’d definitely like to find someone familiar with the M9. My most pressing concerns are character voice and narrative flow, though I welcome SPaG edits and any other suggestions you might have when reading.

*All set with this now.