Star Wars: Darth Maul Explicit Smut

[barbayat]

Fandom: Star Wars: Phantom Menace
Characters/Pairings: Darth Maul/OFC
Rating & Warnings: PWP, rough sex, mentions of domestic violence
Notes: sort of sequal to a previous maul fic, looking mostly for someone to do grammar etc - some constructive criticism for pace, word use and clarity is also greatly appreciated.

Comments

access to read

[darthraven]

Hye, I'm new here. How can i read this story?

Re: access to read

[barbayat]

Hi, I haven't posted it anywhere yet - frankly I wrote it some time ago and it's really not that good. Lots of odd grammar and bad pacing ... but I got such a backlog editing I haven't gotten around to fix it.