tropicsbear: Lirin from Saiyuki grinning (Saiyuki: Hyper Lirin)
Bear ([personal profile] tropicsbear) wrote in [community profile] betaplease2024-12-21 01:23 pm
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Beta for a Saiyuki fic

Fandom: Saiyuki
Characters/Pairings: Koumyou Sanzo/Ni Jianyi | Ukoku, Sharak Sanzo, Genjo Sanzo, Kanzeon Bosatsu, Jiroushin
Rating & Warnings: Teen and up audiences, alternate universe
Estimated Fic Length: 2,037
Notes: I'm mostly looking for feedback on the flow of the story and if there are any repetitive sentence structures, words, expressions, etc. Since this is an AU, I don't think familiarity with the canon is needed but if you're familiar with canon and also have feedback on characterization, I'll gladly accept it!

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