Beta for a Saiyuki fic

[tropicsbear]

Fandom: Saiyuki
Characters/Pairings: Koumyou Sanzo/Ni Jianyi | Ukoku, Sharak Sanzo, Genjo Sanzo, Kanzeon Bosatsu, Jiroushin
Rating & Warnings: Teen and up audiences, alternate universe
Estimated Fic Length: 2,037
Notes: I'm mostly looking for feedback on the flow of the story and if there are any repetitive sentence structures, words, expressions, etc. Since this is an AU, I don't think familiarity with the canon is needed but if you're familiar with canon and also have feedback on characterization, I'll gladly accept it!

Comments

[hokuton_punch]

How quickly do you need it back? I'm pretty busy this week but could probably have feedback to you by around New Year's.

[tropicsbear]

I was hoping to post it before the end of the year 😅 I've got an ongoing streak that I want to maintain. Thanks for the offer, though!

[hokuton_punch]

No problem, hope someone else can help! ♥