Need beta for DCU filksong

[elf]

Fandom: DCU comics (Superman)
Characters/Pairings: Superman/Everyone.

Rating & Warnings: Mature-ish. Not explicit, but mentions a whole lot of sex. Crack, or at least, severely cracky concept. Warning for, ah, underage (implied?); various kinks strongly implied; no explicit violence; no lack of consent.

Notes: Filk, to the tune of "88 Lines About 44 Women." Just under 500 words. Broad superficial knowledge of DCU characters helpful but not necessary (I'm not sure *I* know all the characters I put in this thing).

Needs a tag: either "type: filk," if there might be enough of those to matter, or maybe "type: other," to cover fanworks that don't fit in the most common categories.

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[elf]

Filk is, loosely, fannish songs, often to the tune of other songs. (There's more than that, but that'll work as a starting point.) If I had to recommend a single song to start with, I'd probably go with the Livejournal Shanty. Or there's many at the Virtual Filksing, but all of those are original tunes or to the tunes of other filksongs, to avoid copyright hassles.

Don't need canon check (although if there's anything I've mangled badly, I'd like to know); this is about scansion and tone more than anything else. If you PM me (or email at elfwreck @ gmail.com), I'd love to have you look at it.