Need beta for DCU filksong

[elf]

Fandom: DCU comics (Superman)
Characters/Pairings: Superman/Everyone.

Rating & Warnings: Mature-ish. Not explicit, but mentions a whole lot of sex. Crack, or at least, severely cracky concept. Warning for, ah, underage (implied?); various kinks strongly implied; no explicit violence; no lack of consent.

Notes: Filk, to the tune of "88 Lines About 44 Women." Just under 500 words. Broad superficial knowledge of DCU characters helpful but not necessary (I'm not sure *I* know all the characters I put in this thing).

Needs a tag: either "type: filk," if there might be enough of those to matter, or maybe "type: other," to cover fanworks that don't fit in the most common categories.

Comments

[elf]

The more the merrier! Love to have it looked at with an eye for scansion in particular--it *doesn't* scan exactly (nor rhyme exactly), but neither does the original, and I could use help sorting out which of my tweaks work and which don't.

It's been through one beta pass and caught several issues, but I've now lost all sense of how well it fits the song, because in my head, it scans just fine.

[opusculasedfera]

I'd be happy to have a shot at that if you'd like. Send me a copy at lidabetATgmail or PM me? (Or however you like to have things beta-read, I'm used to adding comments to worddocs, but I'm flexible.)