beta for an A Song of Ice & Fire fic for female_fest requested!

[kitsuneasika]

Fandom: A Song of Ice & Fire
Characters/Pairings: Sansa-centric, Arya/Sansa, Daenerys/Sansa, Harry Hardying/Sansa

Rating & Warnings: Sibling Incest, one scene that could be seen as dub-con, character deaths EVERYWHERE (though it's mostly in the background/only mentioned), spoilers for various events/characters in the entire series.
Notes: I'd like someone who'd look over the storytelling and actual writing. If my scenes are rushed, or if the pacing is off, or if the dialogue is awkward, etc. I'd also like it if you could glance over my canon, although that's not as important. Basically, I want someone who would point out the weaknesses in my story, but is also willing to offer suggestions as to how to make it better. I'm mildly freaking out over the whole thing, so any help would be greatly appreciated.

Finally, I'm writing this story for a prompt over at female_fest, so I'll need the entire thing finished and ready to go by 08 September at the very latest. The entire thing is a little less 4.5K in its current state.

beta found!