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ka_sera_seraFandom: Detroit: Become Human
Characters/Pairings: Hank Anderson & Connor
Rating & Warnings: for general audiences, no warnings
Estimated Fic Length: just under 12,000 words
Notes: I've got it as finished as I can get it, I'd just like one last look over or two to see if I need to write smoother transitions between scenes, and especially to help me figure out a line to end it on. Checking for natural-sounding dialogue and characterization would be a plus, but aren't what I'm primarily concerned with. If you're up for it we can talk on comments here, via email at xiilnek at gmail, or by dreamwidth messages to this account. (This is an RP account but I was afraid if I made a dreamwidth account with my usual username just to join this comm the account would look like a bot.)
Characters/Pairings: Hank Anderson & Connor
Rating & Warnings: for general audiences, no warnings
Estimated Fic Length: just under 12,000 words
Notes: I've got it as finished as I can get it, I'd just like one last look over or two to see if I need to write smoother transitions between scenes, and especially to help me figure out a line to end it on. Checking for natural-sounding dialogue and characterization would be a plus, but aren't what I'm primarily concerned with. If you're up for it we can talk on comments here, via email at xiilnek at gmail, or by dreamwidth messages to this account. (This is an RP account but I was afraid if I made a dreamwidth account with my usual username just to join this comm the account would look like a bot.)
