Jul. 25th, 2020

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Fandom: Miraculous Ladybug
Characters/Pairings: Adrien Agreste (& Gabriel Agreste)
Rating & Warnings: Teen, I think? and No Archive Warnings Apply, but see notes
Estimated Fic Length: fic, no clue; scene I'm worried about, 1.7K
Notes: the canon this fic is for is distinctly SFF (it's the spiritual grandkid of Sailor Moon and Wonder Woman), but that should not make any of the parts I'm worried about any different from how they'd be in a present-day-France no-speculative-elements story. (sans coronavirus.)

the scene's action is someone having a heart attack and a couple of people with CPR training and an AED working to save him; the PoV character is one of the latter, and nobody dies in this story. (probably.) I know American Heart Association changed a relevant mnemonic from ABC to CAB, and because of reasons I don't care, but if there's any other inaccuracies, I want to know.


[mods: the tag this needs is a 'type:' one, because I am sure of a few of those that this story is not, but not which one it is. and also I'm not looking for a beta for the whole fic, just the first-or-only scene that needs a bunch of research. (my outline keeps changing on me, so I don't know if I'm going to have any scenes that will need a beta to check medical/procedural accuracy for the subsequent hospital stay.)]

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