[Beta Found] Original Work, Historical

[acherry]

 Hello! I need to get a few short lines of dialogue SPaG checked, it's only less than 30 words in all because they are featured in a story in a different language, basically. Most of the dialogues are meant in British English, the last bit is in AE. They're said by British and US soldiers, in WWII era. I'd be really grateful for any help!!