May. 24th, 2021

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Fandom: Star Wars Prequels Trilogy, specifically Episode I and II
Characters: Shmi Skywalker, original characters, Anakin Skywalker, Cliegg Lars, Owen Lars, Beru Lars
Rating & Warnings: Teen; warning for abduction, descriptions of physical distress, description of a panic attack
Estimated Fic Length: 49k

Notes:

The fic is a fix-it AU of Episode II that diverges after Shmi Skywalker is abducted by the Tuskens, with Shmi as the protagonist.

I’m primarily looking for a “structural edit” type of beta - story arc, plot holes, characterization, pacing, that kind of stuff. The story is almost all written up and even partially line-edited, but I’m willing to take an axe to it if need be.

There is quite a lot of original world-building, if that would be an issue. It would be great if you knew the canon, as I’m making characterization decisions and I’d love some opinion on that, but it isn’t necessary.

 

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