A beta-reader, if you please!

Fandoms: The Move RPS/Brum (1992)
Cast: Brum, werewolf!Carl Wayne, seer!Roy Wood, werewolf!FtM!Bev Bevan, werewolf!Ace Kefford, Trevor Burton
Pairings: Roy Wood/Trevor Burton, Carl Wayne/Bev Bevan, Bev Bevan/Ace Kefford
Length: 44.6k / 7 chapters + prologue/epilogue
Rating and Warnings: FRM/Mature/M15+; warnings for grumpy old men dealing (or not dealing) with post-apocalyptic trauma and one non-explicit sex scene that could be read as dubcon. Lots (and lots) of walking. May destroy your childhood.

Notes: This is a complete first draft, written for apocalypsebang/apocalypsebang. It deals with post-apocalypse (zombies) survival and trauma, and follows on from Brum and the Apocalypse, which I wrote for apocabigbang last year. You don't have to have read the previous fic, though there are a few brief references to it in this current fic. Setting is AU!UK, covers late 2007-early 2008(ish).

I would appreciate a technical beta giving this a once-over to check story structure, plausibility, and coherency, just in case there's anything glaringly wrong with it. I think it's okay, but I could always do with another set of eyes just to make sure. It also needs to be stand-alone, so I'd really like to know if there's anything that I haven't fully explained. Obscure fandoms are obscure so I'm not expecting canon knowledge.

I also really need a Britpicker because I'm Australian and I'm not entirely confident I've picked out every mistake or got my geography correct. Familiarity with pub billiards a bonus, because I know I've messed up that scene. Also, I've just realised that my Australian brain forgot that Roy and Trevor spend half the fic walking across the southern part of England through the winter (*facepalm*) and obviously that will need to be fixed because I'm pretty sure I got all the weather wrong and they might be better off finding somewhere to camp for a while instead of pushing on. Any help with that would be appreciated.

Deadlines: Final draft is due on Jan 26th, 2013; I'd really like to get the fic beta'd before January if at all possible, though this is negotiable, given the time of year.
Contact: Comment here, send me a PM, or email ibdjehuty AT gmail.com.